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Sunday, August 13, 2006

A New Fairy Tale

I have a new fairy tale to tell.
But am afraid kids won't like it.
It has'nt got a good ending.
Infact, it is distressingly sad..
It does not make a conjunction.
Ever been told a sad fairy tale?
Where prince loses the princess?

Ever been hit hard between your brows?
With normal words, which conjure
the news of a great loss?

Ever been told how to behave?
And that what you had been doing -
Is totally wrong?

Ever felt a cry choking your throat?

Ever felt ur heart implode,
which leaves you thoughtless?

Ever reliazed you are staring-
at nothing but vaccum?

Ever?

If yes, you would understand me.
yes, you would understand me.

at the least, you should .

8 Comments:

Blogger retarded said...

u call this a poem?
venting of emotions?
its nothing but some words put together.
you could have left them unwritten.

the silence which would have remained in your heart would have given you peace..

11:38 pm, August 13, 2006

 
Blogger retarded said...

I donno whathe hell you think of urself.
gosh! had i got u in a hand's distance..

11:39 pm, August 13, 2006

 
Blogger Messed Up said...

wow that was harsh!

11:39 pm, August 13, 2006

 
Blogger Shuba said...

who is the YOU?? what is the problem??

10:16 am, August 14, 2006

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

cant predict if i'll like it .. but as a kid i cant help but be curious abt it (now wht was it abt the curiosity and the cat again!?!?).. am i not always so curious and get my eyes a few unstoppable tears, a few unexplainable choking in the throat.. but then.. am a kid.. and cant help but be glued to ur fairy tale.. even if at the end i let my angusih get the better of me.. i know my anguish'll find the peace in ur eyes.. i know the the discombobulated of mine will only be soothed by ur voice - no matter where the tale will lead..

tell me the fairy tale.. take me to tht land..

4:31 pm, October 08, 2006

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

This is really gr8....!!!! really amazing.... the feeling is really painful.... right???

10:06 pm, November 23, 2006

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

DUSHT!!!
that's gr8!!!! it's mine..... really painful!!!!!

8:40 am, January 26, 2007

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Yes,Fully

12:38 pm, July 15, 2008

 

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