W E I R D

Friday, August 10, 2007

Naming

Now, no relationship
Should go unnamed..
This one - my co-student; this, my brother,
Him, co conspirator; here, my colleague,
You, master and him, my servant.

Each relation should be compartmented.

She, my student; her, my love;
She, friend and this girl, here is my reader.
Every distance must be set.
These many yards from him
These many feet from her..

Each hug’s meaning,
Should be predetermined!
Each kiss’ depth,
Should be pre-calculated!

My finger might get bitten off,
If I try to caress her hair..
Those folded hands of him,
Might be carrying a gun..

Those wonderful times
Of unnamed relationships-
Are now, over.

Every step, every deed,
Should not go uncounted.
Love consciously;
Poison knowingly;
Do not lose your consciousness,
Even when you die.
Write them down –
Each strutting breath;
Each contortion of heart;
Each degree of freezing limbs.

Count,
Measure,
Label,

Earth, Sky, Mountain, Ocean
Birds’ chirps, aroma of flowers,

Love, Like, Care,

Me, You, He, She,

Them…

{A direct traslation [ though i have taken some liberties] of 'Peridal' by Satchidanandan in Malayalam. Was dusting some old magazines when i noticed this(again)...
hence the above - retarde }

4 Comments:

Blogger Chandamita said...

Too good...

11:53 am, August 12, 2007

 
Blogger Shuba said...

So you keep throwing surprises...though the original thought is not urs,i guess u wud have done justice..shaking...

4:07 am, August 13, 2007

 
Blogger Unknown said...

LOKA SAMASTHA SUKHINO BAVANTHU ennaley pramanam....
loved the translation...
serikulathu ayachu tharuo?
:)

10:04 am, August 17, 2007

 
Blogger Questqueen said...

The death of an unnamed relationship...nice nice...
Was more like an eye-opener to me..didn't know u cud translate n all...only thought u could understand both malayalam and english and speak the two tounges very well, thats all!! :P

1:14 pm, September 06, 2008

 

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